Wednesday, October 26, 2005

Look Inside, and Tell me what it is that you See?

I see sadness, despair, populations of painful perceptions buried in time. Your corneas close in on a fine point, making it quiver. There is evidence of your presence in those changing rivulets in your eyes, the glistening pupils, [she is somewhere, back there] those two quaint windows, opening out from your mind, and gently processing, with all their hidden knowledge.

4 Comments:

Anonymous mitz said...

WOW!
that was deep.
and very well said.
who is she?

10:00 AM  
Blogger sirbarrett said...

She's a muse; a memory; succubis. I'm glad you liked it.

10:16 AM  
Blogger Lorena said...

you are a very perceptive writer. everything your write seems very powerful and inspiring. you have a way with words.

i love this piece "she is somewhere, back there" i like the thought of this.

lovely.

3:27 PM  
Anonymous mitz said...

very nice B

11:51 AM  

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