Wednesday, October 26, 2005

Look Inside, and Tell me what it is that you See?

I see sadness, despair, populations of painful perceptions buried in time. Your corneas close in on a fine point, making it quiver. There is evidence of your presence in those changing rivulets in your eyes, the glistening pupils, [she is somewhere, back there] those two quaint windows, opening out from your mind, and gently processing, with all their hidden knowledge.


Anonymous mitz said...

that was deep.
and very well said.
who is she?

10:00 a.m.  
Blogger sirbarrett said...

She's a muse; a memory; succubis. I'm glad you liked it.

10:16 a.m.  
Blogger Lorena said...

you are a very perceptive writer. everything your write seems very powerful and inspiring. you have a way with words.

i love this piece "she is somewhere, back there" i like the thought of this.


3:27 p.m.  
Anonymous mitz said...

very nice B

11:51 a.m.  

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